Artist Statements–we love them, we hate them. OK, mostly we hate them. Well, we hate writing them anyway. Some of us say too little, some too much. So what belongs in an artist statement?
Give us the facts, just the facts. An artist statement is supposed to tell someone about your work when you can’t be standing there to tell them yourself. Why do you do what you do, what techniques do you employ–is there a reason you employ them? What influences you? Are you trying to make a statement in your work?
Please don’t tell us where you went to school and how many kids you have. We don’t really want to know about your dog, your bladder condition or that you drive carpool to soccer on Thursdays. Unless, of course, any of this information is directly relevant to understanding your work.
And PLEASE don’t try to make your artist statement ART all by itself. If someone walks away scratching their head, more confused than before they read it, your artist statement has failed.
Some exhibitions will ask for a specific artist statement just for that one piece. In that case the rules are the same, just specific to one artwork.
Artist Statements are the same regardless of your medium. A few general rules:
- Write in the first person, this is you talking, it isn’t a review by Art in America.
- Keep it to a page unless you have been specifically asked to write something longer.
- Try to avoid “artspeak” terms and language. Write for an audience who has never seen your work and who may not be artists.
- Start with a paragraph of introduction and then get into more detailed information
- Be careful of grammar and spelling. It counts.
Just for fun, here are two artist statements, one good and one, well, not so good.
Artist statement #1:
Susie Creamcheese is an amazing art quilter, sculptor, multimedia performance artist and she has written two books of cowboy poetry that she self-published. She likes to explore the extraordinary in everyday things. And nature is inpriational. Juxtipoze organic shapes and spiritual awakening. Her dreamscape of images conjure up the changing landscape of the human predicament and our delicate environment while morphing her creative energy into a synergy of beautiful expressions of wind-water-sky where the landscape of the fabric surface becomes like the universe. Colors vacillate between pastels and a palette that explodes with radiance not unlike the ocean.
Susie has been an art quilter for ten years, but has been making art since she was three years old. Her interest in art began with fingerpainting in nursery school and she won the “best painting” award in high school. Besides making art quilts she is well known for her macramé toothbrush holders and exquisite macaroni necklaces. She majored in accounting and interpretive Nordic dance in college, and has worked in the meat packing industry for the past twenty years. Currently she is taking classes at a local community college and was highly influenced by a five day retreat with fiber artist Raven Starlight-Rosenblatt. I am married to an architect and have two beautiful children, three dogs and a cat. I grew up in Oklahoma, now I live California where she am also on the PTA. The Journal Star Ledger-Chronicle called her work in a recent show in the local library “really nice.”
Art is life.
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What have we learned about her art?
What her work is—art quilts
Why she does it—we don’t know
Her methods—we don’t know
Why she uses the materials she does—we don’t know
Why she uses the techniques she does—we don’t know
How she works—we don’t know
Influences and inspirations—we don’t know
Does her work have a message—we don’t know
Why does she tell us what her job is—we don’t know
Why does she tell us where she lives—we don’t know
What does her work say—something about organic and spiritual and the human predicament and wind-water-sky and the universe and nature.
Anything else? Misspellings, grammar issues and written in the third person with a slip up. This artist statement is unfocused and the information contained in it is irrelevant and unhelpful. We do not know anything more about her work after reading this statement.
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Artist statement #2
Susie Creamcheese
www.susiecreamcheese.com
Living on the beach in Southern California, I watch the ocean and the way the light changes throughout the day. The reflections of surrounding buildings and clouds fascinate me. It is these distorted reflections, the unexpected colors and movement of the water that I try to capture in my hand appliquéd water quilts.
I use silk because its beautiful reflective quality, the smooth sheen of its surface and the intensity of its color all remind me of water. As part of my commitment to preserve the environment, I use only organic plant-based dyes on plain white silk, dried in the sun.
The edges of my fabrics are turned under and sewn by hand so that there are no loose threads and the curved lines are clean and pure. I work spontaneously, making artistic decisions as I go, with no particular plan in mind. Small faceted glass beads are added to the surface to catch the light.
My job as an environmentalist has made me keenly aware of the importance of protecting our oceans. For me, water has always represented peace and serenity, and my work celebrates this magnificent endangered resource.
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What have we learned about her art?
What her work is—hand appliquéd water quilts
Why she does it—she lives near the ocean and is inspired by the changing light and reflections on the water
Her methods—hand dyed fabric, hand sewn and beading
Why she uses the materials she does—silk has qualities that remind her of water, dyes that are natural protect the environment, beads reflect light
Why she uses the techniques she does—hand sewing provides clean smooth edges
How she works—spontaneously without a plan
Influences and inspirations—water and reflections in the water
Does her work have a message—yes, protecting the ocean and the environment
Why does she tell us what her job is—it is directly relevant to her theme and working methods—it speaks to who she is and what moves her to do the work she does
Why does she tell us where she lives—her work is a reflection of where she lives and therefore speaks to who she is and what she does in her art
What does her work say—that the ocean is serene and peaceful and we should appreciate and protect it
Anything else? She has included a web address so we can see more of her work.
Written in the first person, this artist statement makes us feel as if we were standing next to her as she talked about her work. We have a better understanding of who she is and why she does what she does in a very short and to the point statement.
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Get it? Hope you didn’t recognize anything in that first artist statement that sounded familiar! If you did, maybe this is the week to start working on a replacement!